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This is the first draft for the teaser poster of my film. By showing it to the class i managed to get feedback on which i need to improve and change on the next draft, things i need to change are:
- The tagline needs to be changed as karma can come across differently to different people as the people in my class had different perspectives of it.
- My logo on the bottom left hand corner needs to have its colour changed due to its red/black colour theme makes it look like a part of the poster
- My website link needs to be changed from my blogger to a made up site that would match the film ETC http://www.369shortfilm.com/
Good attempt, i like the fact that you have used Photoshop to advance your skills and give the impression of blood round the sides - this conveys the genre of the short film and that the footage will be gruesome or quite menacing. Your tagline is catchy however doesn't give off the impression of professionalism. Perhaps you should rethink the tagline. The poster overall is effective and the anotations are direct when you explain the features you have used. I can see you understand the conventions of a poster.
ReplyDeletePerhaps you should make this image smaller as well because it is over lapping your links which makes it harder to navigate.
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